First Draft

Editing the first draft is rather straight forward,we got feedback from our teacher we understand and digested his comment of the first draft and are currently planning another day to film, a few of the shot weren't accurate and showing what they were mean't to show. For example at the end of the first draft we noticed that the build up to the cannibal scene was far too long, and when it came to the final sequence it wasn't as clear as it could be.

The film is black and white, as a group we are still discussing the fact of filming in colour. It will improve the quality and visibility of the film. We found that the sound wasn't congruent as it could be so that another area we will be looking into. There are still some effect that we want to put in, when we come to editing the final sequence we will be putting in a clever re-telling the story style effect, For example after the production name and the title we will be putting pretend statistics and a hand-held video effect with it, if your still confused watch the final draft it's clear.